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Haiku I

Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:35 PM EST
arts, poem
By mstanley2265
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mstanley2265

The secret .....borrow and expand

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Reply#1 - Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:41 PM EST
AmericaRepublic

crap..I never done this..lol..voted up though..lol

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#1.1 - Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:46 PM EST
mstanley2265

AR, 17 syllables only...but this isn't True Haiku (I'm not Japanese) it's sorta (Hoosier which I am) Haiku though I did the two juxtaposition words All Nothing. Definition below :)

Haiku (俳句, haikai verse?) listen (help·info) (no separate plural form), is a very short form of Japanese poetry typically characterised by three qualities:

  • The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru).[1] This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas[2] and a kireji ("cutting word") between them, a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.[3]
  • Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae), in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 on respectively.[4] Any one of the three phrases may end with the kireji.[5] Although haiku are often stated to have 17 syllables,[6] this is incorrect as syllables and on are not the same.
  • A kigo (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a saijiki, an extensive but defined list of such words. The majority of kigo, but not all, are drawn from the natural world. This, combined with the origins of haiku in pre-industrial Japan, has led to the inaccurate impression that haiku are necessarily nature poems.
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#1.2 - Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:53 PM EST
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deepwater don

17 syllables worked for me. All I need for a haiku, Thanks for the offering.

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Reply#2 - Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:11 PM EST
mstanley2265

Yep, for me too...lol I'm working on figuring out the 5,7, 5 deal.

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#2.1 - Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:15 PM EST
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etva

I had to really think about that one! Very profound!

    Reply#3 - Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:13 PM EST
    mstanley2265

    That Haiku is...my daughter in law said Deep...The way, I think, is to read each word pause another word. Then it starts to make sense, though I've had to read some aloud, several times to get the meaning or close to it anyway. lol I'm still working on writing in this style, it's Work. sighhhh

      #3.1 - Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:31 PM EST
      etva

      *grins* I didn't even start to get it until my second reading, and took another two to fully realize the concept:) I agree -- it is deep, but also hidden. Those are the kind I like best:)

      • 1 vote
      #3.2 - Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:35 PM EST
      mstanley2265

      Soooo, my dabbling has led to a 'following'....hmm have to think about that.

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      #3.3 - Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:37 PM EST
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